Once again, with help from Punctuation Made Simple (who threw me for a loop because they changed their website up, and who I'm calling PMS for short from this point on. HAHAHAHAHA), we're learning about some commonly misused punctuation marks. This week: the ellipsis. Especially overused by newbies (definitely me in my first attempt at a novel).
Here are the rules:
[1] An ellipsis takes the place of omitted words in a quotation
"...and didn't even say goodbye."
"She was talking about writing, editing...until she turned blue in the face."
[2] Indicates a long thoughtful pause
I want to write...no, I need to write.
[3] Indicates trailing off (as opposed to an abrupt interruption)
I was so tired. I just couldn't write anymore. Just couldn't...
[4] Indicates a continuation of time
The bomb counted down: ten, nine, eight...
[5] Indicates pauses in conversation as if a "realization" is occurring
"But how could he...could she...could they?"
Syntax
No spaces before or after the ellipsis.(okay, this is what PMS says. When I got my copy edits they not only put spaces before the ellipsis, the put them between the dots. Like so: . . . Just sayin')
"Don't let me fall..."
No period after an ellipsis.
No period after an ellipsis.
Do remember to close your quotation.
Usage Key
Stylistically, it is helpful to think of ellipsis points as a thoughtful sigh.
Misuse
The biggest misuse of ellipsis is to overuse them (Yup). As with all highly stylistic constructions, a little goes a long way.
Remember: for an interrupted quote, us an em dash (we'll talk about the em dash next week. I loves me the em dash, so did my copy editor) . Reserve ellipsis for long pauses, not abrupt interruptions.
I hope this clears things up a bit.
Like I said next week, we'll be talking about the em dash. Happy editing!!!
Usage Key
Stylistically, it is helpful to think of ellipsis points as a thoughtful sigh.
Misuse
The biggest misuse of ellipsis is to overuse them (Yup). As with all highly stylistic constructions, a little goes a long way.
Remember: for an interrupted quote, us an em dash (we'll talk about the em dash next week. I loves me the em dash, so did my copy editor) . Reserve ellipsis for long pauses, not abrupt interruptions.
I hope this clears things up a bit.
Like I said next week, we'll be talking about the em dash. Happy editing!!!
Thanks for the tips!
ReplyDeleteSigned a serial ellipses abuser :)